writing 2 : my experience and my hope

Yayang Anjarsit

1200966/2012

WRITING 2

MY EXPERIENCE IN WRITING 1

Writing is the lesson that students should take in English Department. It is divided into some parts. It is began in second semester and finished at fifth semester.  Writing is process about write any ideas that we are thinking. We should let our brain work hard to create creative ideas. In writing 1 that I have passed last semester. My lecturers, gave me many knowledge that very usefull for me. They gave me some tehnique for writing to make it easier for me in writing. As a beginner, I experienced about many things in writing 1. I felt some difficulties like: my grammar, time limit, and my self confidence.

Grammar is one of the requirements that should we put in when we are writing. In English we have many structures based on the function of the time or words arrangement. I also learn about grammar 1 in second semester. Sometimes it makes me confused because there are many tenses in structure. I had to choose the certain tenses to put it in my writing.It was disturbing me, when I was writing and confused about choosing the structure and I could not decide the structure I became blank. My brain stopped working, maybe it will be fogging if it can. Because of that I could not explain my ideas clearly. It made me afraid to show my writing to others.

Time limit is also the next problem that happened in writing 1. The process took a long time when we are writing, but I should do the process to produce a good writing. It is very annoying, because it is always happened in examination. The time limit also limit me to explain my ideas clearly. I should did tehnique of free writing, eventhought as a beginner I should made a list tehnique, so I could know about what I should do in writing before I wrote it as a result. It is difficult for me to create something in the short time. I should forced my brain to work harder than before.  It is difficult to work under pressure.

The last was about my self confidence. My lecturers in writing 1 ever told that learning is not about the mark, but it is about the process. It can be saw from our participation in the class, by giving advice and asking questions. It is difficult for me to put my hands up and share my opinion. If my friends put their hands up, i also wanted to do the same thing, but my hands felt very weight when the lecturer ask me to gave a question or some advices. Actually that our chance to get a mark from the lecturer, and it helped me became active student and being brave to explain my opinion to others.

Learning writing is important, because we need it to face final exam. We should make a paper, so it needs good ability in writing. The process is important. We could learn from how produced a good writing by following some tehnique, so I could choose the best tehnique for my writing. After knew my mistakes, I should correct the wrong thing become the right thing. It is good to learn from our mistakes and keep trying. So we can get the best.

MY HOPE IN WRITING 2

Now I am in writing 2. With new lecturers, new method, new topic and new motivation, I hope I could do writing 2 better than in writing 1. I have ever been experienced many things in writing 1. Many mistakes that I did in writing 1 should be become learning motivation to get the best result. I hope I can decrease many errors in my writing, and I could increase my ability in writing.

In writing 2 I hope I could do the best. From writing 1, I know where is my weakness in writing. So, I could avoid it and makes me more confidence to explain my ideas. If I could not more confidence to share my ability, I am sure that I could get best result. In writing 2 I also hope that my lecturers more care about the assignment. I hope they always check the assignment, so the students know their mistakes and could check it.

In writing 2 I hope it will easier for me to create new creative ideas, so i could produce my best writing. I also hope that I could get many knowledge, get many thing that I never know before, so it will be something that I could share with my students later. Beside that of chours it will help me to create the best result for writing. I hope in writing 2, I become more creative and my capability also better than in writing 1.

project writing 2 : Discussion text

Yayang Anjarsit

1200966/2012

K1/ WRITING 2

REVISI 3

Should Indonesia Import Fruits?

Nowadays, we can find in the market many big sizes, colorful, and fresh fruit which make us want to buy it. Have you ever though where it comes from? Do the fruit is local fruits ore import ones? Most of the fruits that we buy are import fruit. Why can it be? The distribution of import fruits is very large in our country, so how about local fruits? Where we can find it? Today it is very difficult to find local fruits especially in the big city. The sellers like to sell the import fruits rather than local fruits why can it be? There are some advantages and disadvantages about import fruit.

Based on the seller side, selling import fruits give them a lot of benefit rather than local fruit. Import fruits have good quality. It has many variants that give the consumer many choices. Import fruits are fresher, more colorful, and have bigger size than local fruit. It is because the importer fruits have sophisticated technology to make their fruit better than local fruit. By selling import fruits, the sellers also can meet a demand of the consumers. The secretary-general of Aprindo, Satria Hamid said that they took import fruit from foreign country because of the consumers’ request. They choose import fruits because it has good quality, so the consumer satisfied with it. The market also can prepare fruits that local fruits do not harvest yet. It makes the consumer easier to get the fruits that they want without waiting until harvest fruits.

For economical reason, the prices of import fruits are cheaper than local fruits. Even it is import fruit, it does not mean that it has expensive price than local fruit. For local fruit, the farmers still use traditional ways to cultivate their production. Farmers should buy the manure and the tools which cause the cost of the production will increase. When the cost of production is high, the price of the local fruits should be high in order to get profit. For example, chili’s farmers in Karo Roni Jaya Bukit SP district explained that it is difficult to get chilies with good quality because of the financial capital that very expensive and also wages of the worker. Henry-potatoes’ farmer- said,” Financial capital for one tree of the potato take out Rp. 2000 including the seed, the manure and the employees. It exactly different with import fruit that use sophisticated technology in cultivate the fruits. The importer country can create the manure that can produce fruits that have good quality as much as possible that can decrease the production cost. In this time the deficit of the import fruits and vegetables are around Rp. 18 quintillion/year, so there is so much profit that foreign farmers get than local farmers.

On the other hand, import fruit also have some disadvantages. We have to know how the importer keeps their import fruits always fresh. The producers use chemical products to keep the quality of their fruits like formalin It is impossible to keep fruit still fresh, because it takes a long time to distribute the fruits to another country. Edi Susanto-the manager of fruits shop “Total Buah Segar” said that import fruits in Indonesia contain formalin to keep the fruits still fresh. Actually import fruits that contain the substance are fruits from USA ( America Serikat) and China. The fruits are apple, grape, orange and pear. Last years KTNA ( Kontak Tani Nelayan andalan ) in Jombang, West Java refused 1000 ton of import fruits that contain formalin and coloring substances. It is not good for our health if we consume it in the long time. The fruit that contain chemical substances can cause cancer even we wash the fruits before we eat it, because the substances still adhere in that fruits.

Besides that, import fruit also can decrease the production of local fruit. If the margin of local fruits is low, it cause the farmers will bankrupt, so the percentage of the unemployed will increase. The consumer request of fruits in Indonesia is very high. It is about 18,5 million ton/year. Actually the local fruits also increasing 12-15 % in this 5 years. Sri Kuntarsih-the director of PDB said that local fruits are increasing in 2005-2010 about 63,5 %. However, Indonesia has many places that very convenient and prosperous to plant many fruit. Indonesia is agrarian country that most of the society works as farmer. The climate of Indonesia is tropical. In tropical climate with the land that very prosperous, Indonesia can produce fruits that more delicious than import fruits.

The government should do act about import fruits in Indonesia. It needs to do some massive and systematic strategies to resolve this problem. In my opinion, the government should limit the import fruits in Indonesia, because Indonesia has the place, the good seed, and very skillful farmer that can produce good fruit. If we can increase the production of our fruit it will affect in our economical. If we can fulfill the consumer request of the fruits, we can stop the import fruit and save the calculation of our financial, and it will become profit for Indonesia if we can export our fruit. The consumers also must be aware to love Indonesian product.  If we can do that, it will affect in the stabilization of economy in Indonesia.

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Narrative Text : Based On True Story

Yayang Anjarsit

1200966/2012

Writing 2/ K1

MY SADNESS CONFESSION

“ Dear god ”

“ The only thing I asked of you is to hold her when I am not around, when I much too far away ”

“ We all need that person who can be true to you, but I left her when I found her and now I wished I would stay “

“ Cause I am lonely and I’m tired, I missing you again, oh no.... once again”

The song remains me about my friendship. Especially about the even when we were taking a vacation together. I still remember how it is happened. I still remember your expression when I decelerated my confession. I know it did not seems with our plan. I know it hurt your heart, but you should know that I felt the same. I still remember our promises after we graduated from senior high school ”To stand together in the sad or happy time, help each other to reach our future. Ignore the person who hurt you, because you have the best person who understand and always  stands  beside you”.

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It was a beautiful day. The blue sky looked clearly without any clouds around it. I could feel the sun shine that gave warm feel to my body when i went to my friend’s house. We planned to go to the beach to celebrate our graduation. In the way, I enjoyed the view. The beaches were in the south of the Java Island, so there a mountain side along the road and also sharp  ravines. The name of the beach were Nampu and Sembukan. Some people called it as the beaches above the clouds, because we just could reach the beach after passed the high ascent. It was challenging me. Sometimes my friends and I felt afraid if the car flew down to the ravines, because the roads were very narrow, but actually it was the challenge.

We arrived in the first beach, Nampu. The beach was very beautiful. The white sand were very soft like white carpet when we walked on it. The soft waves came and called us to swim together with them. Because not many people have known about the beach, the beach was so quite and clean. We felt like we were in the private beach. We took some pictures and walked along the beach. We were very happy, but from deep inside my heart I felt very sad. I did not know what should I do after it. I had something that I should explain to my friends. It effected my mood. My friends knew it and asked me why I looked not enjoy the vacation? I denied them. I told them that I was fine. I did not want to break the vacation.

After we finish enjoying the first beach, we continued to the second beach, Sembukan. It was wonderful beach. The big rocks were standing in the side of the beach. If we climbed the rock and stood on it, we would see a beautiful blue ocean. I took strategies. I asked my friends to climb the rock to see the beautiful ocean in the afternoon. They agreed and we started to climb. After we reached the top, we were very surprised with the scenery. Our eyes just could see the wide blue ocean with the sky that became orange. We sat on the rock and enjoyed the view. Everybody was silent. We just heard the wave fought the rocks that produced the strange sounds. In this change I made confession to my friends that I should go to Sumatra and would study there. My friends were very surprised and could not believe it. They remained me about our plan to stay together when we would be studying in the college. They thought that I broke our promises. I cried, actually I would not want to leave them. There were so many things that I had done with them in senior high school. It was hard  being separated with them, but my parents asked me to stay with them when I continued study in the college. I could not refuse them, because I had been separated with them for 3 years when I studied in senior high school in Java. I tried to explain it clearly, so there was not misunderstanding between us. They could accept my confession, we were hugging and made a new promise that we should go to the beach again after we became a success person.

When we were going back home, I played a song “Dear God by Avenged Sevenfold” and told them that this song is a special song for my best friends. They were very touched with this song and we sang together. I felt sad also happy, because I had best friends that could understand me. Actually that was my sadness confession that I had and the song Dear God became the soundtrack also the memorial song for our friendship.

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The story based on the true story that I have experienced when I was in senior high school. The even always come when I listen to the song Dear God. It inspired me to write down my memorial experience as my writing assignment.

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